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Calloused feet,
Worn from years of
Catching up to little children,
But taken care of
By countless foot massages.

Muscled legs,
Ready for action
In taking youngsters
Wherever they need to go.

A soft, cushioned lap
That has held
So many frightened tots,
Hugging them,
Holding them,
Keeping them safe from harm.

Not quite a perfect body,
Misshapen from times of
Carrying unborn babies
And taking care of those
Delicious, late-night
Chocolate cravings.

A brain fit for a king,
Prepared to outwit
Those pesky teenagers
In their attempts to
Thwart the love of
Old people.

And a heart,
So soft and caring,
Bursting with love
For each individual
Son, daughter, friend, and husband,
That, through the ages,
Never tires
Of pumping out
A mother’s affection.
:iconmusicalgenius321:

Author's Comments

Ok, if you read it (which I'm hoping you do and aren't just looking at my comments :XD:) then you might notice that, up until the brain and heart part, it goes from the feet up to the head and then to the heart, which I consider the most important part of all. And also, it (somewhat) goes from Babies at the beginning down to teenagers and older... :) Doesn't work some of the time, but still

Dedicated to my lovely mother, who has taught me countless numbers of literal equations, both for mathmatics and for love. :XD: I had to get my nerdiness in there


I give =Inked-Page permission to use this :)

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:icontyc113:
I think this is great.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconmusicalgenius321:
Thanks!

--
You raise the blade, you make the change
You re-arrange me 'till I'm sane
You lock the door
And throw away the key
There's someone in my head but it's not me.
--"Brain Damage" Pink Floyd
:icontyc113:
Welcome.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconotseis-ragnarok:
I loved the last stanza.

A belated Mother's Day gift?

--
Shoshite, toki wa ugoki Desu.
:iconash4love:
I loved this. I consider the heart the most important part too. A mother's love is like no other out there. =)

--
"Our doubts are traitors, and make us lose the good we oft might win, by fearing to attempt" William Shakespeare
:iconleave-love-bleedin:
Aw, sweety, it's great! :)

--
"He felt that his whole life was some kind of dream and he sometimes wondered whose it was and whether they were enjoying it." -- Douglas Adams, Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy
:iconnearlywitches:
Good job and nice structure. -thumbs up-
:iconmusicalgenius321:
Haha thanks :hug:

--
You raise the blade, you make the change
You re-arrange me 'till I'm sane
You lock the door
And throw away the key
There's someone in my head but it's not me.
--"Brain Damage" Pink Floyd
:iconmusicalgenius321:
That's very true :)

--
You raise the blade, you make the change
You re-arrange me 'till I'm sane
You lock the door
And throw away the key
There's someone in my head but it's not me.
--"Brain Damage" Pink Floyd

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